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Is the following entry in the dictionary 正确吗?

http://www.chinglish.com/community/show/%E4%BA%94%E4%BA%8C%E9%9B%B6

denisehung wrote:
>  I like to serve the community, to get in touch with different people, 
> and to explore livelihood issues.

I like to serve the community because it allows me to get in touch with 
different people and explore social issues.

or

I like to serve the community. Doing so allows me to get in touch with 
different people and explore social issues.

or

I enjoy serving the community. Doing so allows me to get in touch with 
different people and explore various social issues.

Note: You could use "livelihood", but it is very specific and relates to 
how people make a living and what they go through. I think the term 
social may be what you want to use.

 I like to serve the community, to get in touch with different people, 
and to explore livelihood issues.